Comment for Ivan's movie trailer : Avatar

What I really liked about your analysis for the movie trailer is that you have put how many shots were there. Also, you had many details and specific facts that made me easier to understand how you think about the movie trailer Your paragraph didn't have any mistakes and you also had explained about some of shot effects about it. I think your movie trailer and the paragraph was perfect.

Comment for Gloria's movie trailer : Ice Age

I think I loved your movie trailer because it had so many interesting shots. Also, although your paragraph was not that long, it had some informations that could help the readers understand easily about the movie trailer.

Comment for Diksha's movie trailer : Tooth fairy

I loved your paragraph because it had many details and it was easier to read and understand. You had put many informations specifically, and the paragraph itself was really good. Your paragraph doesn't have any mistakes and anyway it was really good.

Comment for clarissa's movie trailer : Mama mia!

I think the movie trailer was good and had many informations about the movie. Your paragraph was really good and it shows me that you have put your thoughts into it. You didn't have any mistakes in the paragraph. I think everything you have done is really good.

Comment for Claire's movie trailer : Alvin and the chipmunks 2

I think that the movie trailer was so cool and interesting. Also, your paragraph didn't have any mistakes. Your paragraph was well-written with many details and specific reasons. I think yours was perfect.

Comment for Brock's movie trailer : Shrek 4 ever after

I think this movie trailer was really cool and your paragraph was nice. But in your paragraph, you have had one mistake. You wrote 'but, It had one establishing...' but the letter i in 'it' is not supposed to be capitalized. Beside that, it was really good.

Shot effects

ECU = 1

CU = 12

MS = 10

MLS = 26

LS = 12

ELS = 2

ES = 4

Favorite movie trailers

I think this movie trailer doesn't have any tension in it, but it still had put some highlights of the movie and also some of funny parts of the movie because this movie is supposed to be quite funny.

The length of the shots were different. When it is the boring part, the shots were longer than the highlights. The highlights were shorter probably to make viewers become curious about the movie and make them watch the movie.

I think that putting the highlights and the boring part in the movie trailer effects the movie trailer by making the movie longer by putting boring parts and making it interesting by putting highlights of the movie.

I think this movie trailer doesn't have any tension it it, just like a trailer above, and it also had put some highlights of the movie and some of funny parts. The type of movie is humor, so the movie trailer had funny parts. It barely showed highlights and I think it was because the movie trailer producer wanted the viewers to be really curious to watch the movie. I think the shots in the movie were getting shorter as it went, same as the one that I watched to count how many shot effects there were. (Night at the Museum 2: Battle of Smithsonian)

I think this movie trailer has many shots that are different length. The highlight of the movie trailer was in the middle of it, and each shots were short. But other shots were pretty much the same length . I think this movie trailer is really effective to the viewers who is curious about this movie and for them to watch it.

Reflection

Are all the shots the same length? What is the effect of this?

No, the shots from the movie trailer were not the same length. As the movie trailer went, the shots got shorter and shorter, and I think it was to create tension. If the shots are the same length, the viewers will not have any interests in the movie but as the movie trailer made viwers tense, and show not too much about the movie, it will make the viewers become curious what is going to happen.

Extra 3 New panels

Plan how I am going to make my 3 new panels

I think I will have to connect the panels because for the readers, it might not make sense for them if I leave it this way unconnected. Also, as the most of commenters said, I will have to put the characters a bit closer to the screen in the 3 new panels.

Feedback for Claire's Bitstrips

I think your characters were really creative and cute. You also put cute facial expressions to the characters to show the feelings to the readers. There were no spelling or grammar mistakes. I think your Bitstrips is perfect!

Feedback for Brock's Bitstrips

I think your characters were cute and the story was good, but there were a lot of spelling mistakes. In the first panel, you said 'were' instead of 'where', you put 'your' but it was supposed to be 'you're. Also in 4th panel, you said 'were' instead of 'where' again, and you put 'lets' but it was supposed to be 'let's'. But anyway I think the characters were really creative.

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