I think your characters were cute and the story was good, but there were a lot of spelling mistakes. In the first panel, you said 'were' instead of 'where', you put 'your' but it was supposed to be 'you're. Also in 4th panel, you said 'were' instead of 'where' again, and you put 'lets' but it was supposed to be 'let's'. But anyway I think the characters were really creative.
Thursday, March 11, 2010
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